请问这个英语自我介绍有那里语法错误，或者表达不当吗，，这是考研面试自我介绍，对我很重要！不胜感激

Good morning, my respected professor. It's a great honored for me to meet you here. Now, please allow me to give a short brief self-introduction. I'm Lin Shu Hai from Lian.... city of Jiangsu P.... I graduated from Guangxi Arts University, major